From 4552c56f03754ac6349c96ab73f794ecf1861254 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: ioab <a@ioab.net>
Date: Wed, 4 Nov 2015 00:49:44 +0300
Subject: [vb/en] remove unnecessary lines. Improve conditions (8 and 9) subs.

---
 visualbasic.html.markdown | 18 ++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'visualbasic.html.markdown')

diff --git a/visualbasic.html.markdown b/visualbasic.html.markdown
index d6d1759d..30d03f77 100644
--- a/visualbasic.html.markdown
+++ b/visualbasic.html.markdown
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ Module Module1
     'Eight
     Private Sub ConditionalStatement()
         Console.Title = "Conditional Statements | Learn X in Y Minutes"
-        Dim userName As String = Console.ReadLine
+        Dim userName As String
         Console.WriteLine("Hello, What is your name? ") 'Ask the user their name.
         userName = Console.ReadLine() 'Stores the users name.
         If userName = "Adam" Then
@@ -244,30 +244,28 @@ Module Module1
         'When this is the case, more than one if statement would be required.
         'An if statement is great for vending machines. Where the user enters a code.
         'A1, A2, A3, etc to select an item.
-        'All choices can be combined into a single if statement.
+        'All choices can be combined into a single if block.
 
-        Dim selection As String = Console.ReadLine 'Value for selection
+        Dim selection As String 'Declare a variable for selection
+        Console.WriteLine("Please select a product form our lovely vending machine.")
         Console.WriteLine("A1. for 7Up")
         Console.WriteLine("A2. for Fanta")
         Console.WriteLine("A3. for Dr. Pepper")
         Console.WriteLine("A4. for Diet Coke")
-        Console.ReadLine()
+
+        selection = Console.ReadLine() 'Store a selection from the user
         If selection = "A1" Then
             Console.WriteLine("7up")
-            Console.ReadLine()
         ElseIf selection = "A2" Then
             Console.WriteLine("fanta")
-            Console.ReadLine()
         ElseIf selection = "A3" Then
             Console.WriteLine("dr. pepper")
-            Console.ReadLine()
         ElseIf selection = "A4" Then
             Console.WriteLine("diet coke")
-            Console.ReadLine()
         Else
-            Console.WriteLine("Please select a product")
-            Console.ReadLine()
+            Console.WriteLine("Sorry, I don't have any " + selection)
         End If
+        Console.ReadLine()
 
     End Sub
 
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